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New Cover for Monster Island: Omnibus

11/28/2017

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What if you woke up on a deserted island to the sound of screaming? There's a note in your pocket, "Pay for your sins." The monsters you dreamed about are real. They're coming. 

Meet Kat Voss. 
She was kidnapped, along with teens like her, and dumped on a deserted island. 
Then someone hung her twelve-year-old sister from a tree like bait.
The voice on the other end of the camera tells her she has one hour to find her sister. Or else.
The cages are empty.
The monsters are real.
And time is almost up.

Monster Island is a Young Adult mystery thriller where the pages practically turn themselves. Readers who like Maze Runner and Miss Peregrine's Home for Peculiar Children will devour this action-packed tale. Get your copy now. 

This Omnibus Edition collects the five Monster Island stories into a single volume. It is for those who arrived late to the party and who wish to save a dollar or two while picking up the same stories in a single package. Save 50% over buying individual editions. ​
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YA Scavenger Hunt!

10/3/2017

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Welcome to YA Scavenger Hunt!

This bi-annual event was first organized by author Colleen Houck as a way to give readers a chance to gain access to exclusive bonus material from their favorite authors…and a chance to win some awesome prizes! At this hunt, you not only get access to exclusive content from each author, you also get a clue for the hunt. Add up the clues, and you can enter for our prize–one lucky winner will receive one book from each author on the hunt in my team! But play fast: this contest (and all the exclusive bonus material) will only be online for 120 hours!

Go to the YA Scavenger Hunt page to find out all about the hunt. There are seven contests going on simultaneously, and you can enter one or all! I am a part of the PURPLE TEAM–but there is also a red team, an orange team, a gold team, a green team, a blue team, and a pink team for a chance to win a whole different set of books!

If you’d like to find out more about the hunt, see links to all the authors participating, and see the full list of prizes up for grabs, go to the YA Scavenger Hunt page.

Here’s how to YASH

Directions: Below, you’ll notice that I’ve hidden my favorite number. Collect the favorite numbers of all the authors on the purple team, and then add them up (don’t worry, you can use a calculator!).

Entry Form: Once you’ve added up all the numbers, make sure you fill out the form here to officially qualify for the grand prize. Only entries that have the correct number will qualify.
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Rules: Open internationally, anyone below the age of 18 should have a parent or guardian’s permission to enter. To be eligible for the grand prize, you must submit the completed entry form by Sunday, October 8, at noon Pacific Time. Entries sent without the correct number or without contact information will not be considered.

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 Today, I am hosting  CYNDY ETLER for the YA Scavenger Hunt! A modern-day Cinderella, Cyndy Etler was homeless at fourteen, summa cum laude at thirty. Prior to becoming a YA author and teen life coach, Etler was an alternative high school teacher. Her mission in life is to help polite society see the err in its thinking.  So if you're confused and NINETEEN, you need Cyndy. 

Learn more about Cyndy by checking out her author website, or find more about her books here!


EXCLUSIVE CONTENT

As a bonus for you YASHers, here is Cyndy's exclusive content, a chapter Chapter from COILED, prequel of THE DEAD INSIDE & WE CAN’T BE FRIENDS

Backstory: COILED is a young adult memoir. I was a lucky kid: I had books and great teachers, music and imagination, to help me fly above an abusive home life; a school life rife with rejection. This unreleased chapter gives readers a sample of the sweet stuff—the lit, the cool teacher—and the sour.

In the previous scene, my eighth-grade self is swooning, because a girl at my new school, Honor, told me that a boy—a real, true boy!—wants to go out with me. The cheerleaders soon took care of that buzz.

Chapter from COILED

There’s one okay thing about school now: English class. We’re reading this book called Animal Farm, and it’s about all of these animals that live together on a farm. Duh. But the cool thing is, all the animals can talk, and they like, got rid of all the humans. Each of the animals has their rung on the ladder, some above and some below. I don’t know why, but I really get the book.

Mrs. Canaan says it’s about Communism, which is this kind of government where supposedly everyone’s just as good as everybody else, but really there’s only some people that are at the toptop, with their boots on everybody else’s heads. Or like the book says, “All animals are equal, but some are more equal than others.” So basically, the animals just care about being better than everyone else. The writer must’ve been from Connecticut.

You know who doesn’t get the book? The cheerleaders. There are three of them in my English class: Jennifer, Jessica, and Tina. Mrs. Canaan is cool, she lets us choose our own seats, so those three sit together in the center of the room. The seat I chose on the first day of school, when I was the first one in the empty classroom, is one seat behind and one to the left of the cheerleaders’. So I get to hear most of what they say. Believe it or not, though, a lot of what they say isn’t so hot. I mean, it’s good to know girls like them have beauty problems, too, but after the fourth hair dryer comment in a half hour, it gets a little old. When they start to talk about something that’s actually interesting—like I once caught a whiff of “party, Friday night”—Jennifer twists toward my seat for a second, then whips back around, slapping my desk with her hair.

“Later, you guys.”

The other two pinch their lips together and look at me without looking. Then they bake in angry silence.

Mostly they keep up a running discussion about how much English sucks, which it really doesn’t. They’re loud enough for Mrs. Canaan to know they’re talking, but not loud enough to be asking real questions. So it’s like they want to complain about how they need help understanding, but they don’t really want help, or to understand. For example. Mrs. Canaan’s talking today about symbolism, how each animal stands for something bigger than itself, like a historical person or an idea or something.

“Look at our protagonist, Snowball,” Mrs. Canaan says.

Hostess Snowballs. I’m having visions of them, of cupcakes all wrapped up in white goo and coconut. And Jessica’s voice has to cut through all this niceness. Loud enough for her friends plus me, she goes, “Snowball? What kind of idiot calls a pig Snowball?”

“Whatsat, Jessica?” Mrs. Canaan calls from across the room, one brow raised into her forehead.

“What? I didn’t say anything.” Jessica’s lip is angled up, Billy Idol style.

Mrs. Canaan isn’t having it.

“Jessica’s like a sleep-talker, only she does it while she’s awake,” she says. “So, the symbolism here…”

Oh, snap! Nobody even hears that symbolism part. They’re too busy laughing. At Jessica. I can’t believe it. I hold my breath and memorize my desk top. Somehow, I know, I’m gonna end up paying for what Mrs. Canaan just said. Jessica has to get her footing back at the top of the ladder, and I’m an easy rung to step on. Her silence, like a shark fin, swims around me for the rest of the period.

And it has to be today that Mrs. Canaan finishes before the bell. Unlike the other teachers, she’s always still going when the bell rings, drawing pictures on the board to connect her words to our brains. But today, her pictures dry up early.

“Alright, guys. I’m gonna give you a break. You can just hang around and talk until the bell rings.”

Oh please, God, no! My stomach tightens in on itself like a sphincter. I try to do the same with my whole body, to disappear into a small black dot. But the shark knows just where I am.

“Cyndy Etler!” Jessica gleams at me, shocking us all by knowing my name. And it really is us all. Her voice is as loud as a foghorn; the whole class hears it. Oh God, leave the ass dot alone.

“me?” The tiny word’s absorbed by the safe white pages of my notebook, which I’m holding up, to shield me from the free time. Lowering the notebook, I try again. “Me?”

“Of course you! Is there another Cyndy Etler?”

She’s using the special cheerleader voice, the one reserved for talking to cute boys, but why is she using it on me? Her mouth smiles pink, but her eyes shoot black. I wonder why her fangs don’t dice up her lips.

You know how wild animals just know, when something terrible’s about to happen?  You know how they get really still out of like, respect for it? Big, loud groups of teenagers have the same amazing talent. So I’m sitting here in this flash-frozen classroom, the slow-ticking second hand echoing off the walls. You can see Mrs. Canaan’s back through the pebbly window, but she clicked the door closed when she stepped out. A laugh rises out of her. She’s out in the hall for good.

“Cyndy, didn’t I see Scott Cheeney’s arm around you the other day in the hall?” goes Jessica.

And I mean, she probably did. Me and Scott talked on the phone for the first time Thursday, and we said we’d meet by the gym before first the next day. The gym was my idea. He wanted to start out at the cafeteria, but that would’ve been like learning to swim by getting tripped off the high dive. Anyway, when I saw him at the gym door, he didn’t have as many zits as I remembered. So when he went to put his arm around me, I didn’t side step.

It felt…rickety. Like I was getting a hug from Pinocchio. When I would hug Alice at Christ Church, it felt safe and, I dunno, big somehow. But Scott’s arm didn’t feel like that. I think it felt the opposite. It felt thin and unsafe, if that makes any sense.

Scott marched me down the hall that way, nervous and in a noose. He had his grin on, and I had my limbs locked. Then, when the bell rang for first, my limbs turned into spaghetti. I slithered away from him and revved off to social studies, throwing a little, “Bye, Scott” behind me. Right then, I wasn’t sure if I wanted his arm around me again. Now I know I don’t.

“Um, yeah?” My voice comes out small, like an ant. Something easily crushed.

“So Scott Cheeney is your boyfriend?” Her voice is a foot angled over me.

“Um, yeah?” It cracks. My voice and the ant shell.

“But Cyndy!” Her words are half words, half laughter. “Didn’t anyone tell you that Scott Cheeney is a loser?”

And then God shows up, in the form of the bell, and there’s a rush of bag-grabs and chair-slides. Jessica missed her big prize, the pop of laughter from all sides of the class. Nobody cares about a one-girl attack when the hallway crowds are calling. But still, she won, and she knows it. She pushed herself up two rungs by pushing me and my “boyfriend” down two.

Tearing open my notebook, I scratch some words out:

Dear Honor,
I don’t want scott for a boyfriend anymore.
Can you tell him
Cyndy
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CONTINUE THE HUNT 


Well, carry on, YASHers. But don’t forget to enter the YASH-wide contest for a chance to win a ton of books by me, and more. 

To keep going on the YA Scavenger Hunt, you need to check out the next author:  JOSHUA DAVID BELLIN.  Good luck!



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Cover Reveal: The Breeders Stories

5/18/2017

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Get ready. The Breeders Stories combines three novellas you already love and one new story Plan B: Part Two, continuing Nolan's story and his rescue of the girl from Plan B. Available in June 2017. Make sure you are signed up to my newsletter to find out when and get the special subscriber pricing. 
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Easter Blog Hop: Win Big

4/15/2017

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Welcome to the Easter Facebook Hop,

hosted by Love Kissed Suspense!

With tons of prizes from over 100 authors and bloggers, including Amazon gift cards, it’s a great way to spend your Easter Weekend!

Don’t miss out! Visit one, or all to participate. Easy entries.

Meet some new authors! Discover some awesome blogs.

Most of all…have fun!

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Cover Reveal: The Believers, Breeders Book 2

1/26/2017

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Do you love it? As you know, I am in the process of recovering all by Breeders Books. Here is Book Two. For me, this is exactly how I pictured Clay. What about you? What do you think? 
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Cover Reveal! The New Cover of The Breeders

1/22/2017

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I am in love with this cover. When I ran a 99 Designs cover contest to recover The Breeders, I didn't know what to expect. What I got was so many amazing covers it was very difficult to pick. But this above was the fan favorite and won me over almost instantly. I am hoping a whole new audience will see this cover and pick up the book. It is still free. Get it here if you haven't already. 
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Free or Cheap Ebooks Just for you!

12/27/2016

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I love giving my readers free books and this month is no different. Below, are links to ebooks I think you will enjoy all for free or very cheap. Check them out. 
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Girl of Fire: The Expulsion Project Book One (A Science Fiction Dystopian Thriller)
Trattora is the adopted daughter of the Chieftain on a primitive frontier planet. Velkan is an indentured serf who has never known a day of freedom. Forced to flee a terrifying invasion by Galactic Pirates, they find themselves thrown together on a ramshackle mining vessel that harbors more than one dark secret. Fate and chemistry combine when the pair’s matching birth bracelets lead them to a shocking discovery about their true lineage. Stakes rise when they uncover the classified Expulsion Project, and the devastating sacrifice their birth families made to spare their lives. Determined to save them from liquidation, Trattora and Velkan plunge headlong into a frantic race against time and space to take down the genocidal self-actualizing software that now controls large swathes of their home planet. ONLY 0.99 CENTS. 

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Before Tomorrow (Forget Tomorrow)
In a world where all seventeen-year-olds receive a memory from their future selves, Logan Russell's vision is exactly as he expects—and exactly not. He sees himself achieving his greatest wish of becoming a gold-star swimmer, but strangely enough, the vision also shows him locking eyes with a girl from his past, Callie Stone, and experiencing an overwhelming sense of love and belonging. FREE.

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Germination (Feast of Weeds, Book 1): A Novella
Mary knows how to thrive on the street. She makes it her mission to keep other kids away from everyday monsters. But when she’s attacked by a crazed man clutching a bloody heart she realizes—there’s a new kind of monster in town.

A single drop of blood, and now Mary’s one of the infected. Unless she can stop the virus and save her friends, the new monster in town might just be her. FREE.

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Since the Sirens: Sirens of the Zombie Apocalypse, Book 1
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Banished by bad decisions to spend the summer with his great-grandmother, Liam Peters thinks his life is over. After all, Marty Peters is a tough woman to be around. Maybe she wouldn’t be so bad if she'd just take an interest in the modern technology he loves. Sure, she has some insight to her…but the woman is practically “pushing daisies.” Not surprisingly, as tornado sirens announce a city-wide emergency, Liam discovers why that term should be avoided…well…like the plague. FREE.

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The Bottle Stopper (The Paper Duchess Book 1)
"Too much trouble, and you'll end up just like your crazy mother."

Maeve was six when they took her mother away, and left her in the care of her Uncle Lou: a drunk, a misogynist, a fraud.
For eleven years she's lived with him in Falside's slums, deep in the silt of the Falwere River. She bottles his miracle medicine, stocks his apothecary shop, and endures his savage temper.
But as his violence escalates, and his lies come undone, she devises a plan to escape him forever. Even if it means people have to die. FREE.

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Guest Post: Mistakes to Avoid When Writing a Book  by Lucy Adams

10/28/2016

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"I think that writers are made, not born or created out of dreams of childhood trauma—that becoming a writer (or a painter, actor, director, dancer, and so on) is a direct result of conscious will." – Stephen King.

I believe almost everyone had once tried writing. Well, if you did, the paper is just for you. If you didn’t, the paper is for you as well. Today, I’m going to share the most typical writing issues that prevent novice writers from becoming reputed pen wizards.

If you don’t agree or have something to add, feel free to share it in comments.

PART I: MISLEADING MINDSET

#1 Uncertain Position

How could you make the reader trust you if you don’t believe in what you say? The first common mistake of beginners is, oddly enough, their uncertainty. What’s the reason?

Currently, there are an incredible number of books on different subjects and for all tastes, so it’s quite challenging to cover something new that has never existed. Naturally, a novice writer hesitates whether it makes sense to try to bring to mankind if everything has long been written.

Well, that’s not true as every person is unique and has something to say to the world. Leave alone the f brilliant ideas of the past, think about the future! If you feel the need to share – do it, don’t hold yourself! Be sure, in case you worthy present your thoughts, you’ll be approved by the crowd.

#2 An Aspiring Writer is Confused and Does not Know What to Write About
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The second mistake comes from the first one. The problem of this kind often occurs because of the lack of experience in the field. Such a person may decide to wait for "better times," until he would gain the needed experience and be able to write.

Again, even a child has something to tell to the world. There’s no any boundaries – trust to your subconscious. Often, we do not represent what a storehouse keeps our brain and what incredible surprise can we do. Believe in yourself and be sure to try.

#3 Lack of Time
Actually, the lack of time is just an excuse that prevents the beginning of the development of any young writer. Of course, you can work all day and think about writing a book when you’ll take a vacation. Alas, but this doesn’t work.

To begin with, you have a very small chance to write something consistent at once. Please don’t think that all the popular writers were rich when they started writing. They just allocated some time for the lovely hobby that later turned into the main source of income. Moreover, writing requires training and practice. Believe me or not, that’s a kind of sport.

The solution is simple: write on a daily basis! Spend at list a half an hour writing. If you have nothing to write about, write down current thoughts and impressions. This will help to develop your writing skills and expand your imagination, perhaps.
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#4 Absence of Working Algorithm
The fourth mistake is that most young writers don’t have any plan. No matter how well self-organized you are, you do need a plan! Schedule your work and cover as much material as you have planned.
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#5 Greed
Never, never start writing just for money! Fame and money will come, but they shouldn’t be your original goals! A true writer gets pleasure from the creative process, and that’s the only way to create a true masterpiece.

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PART II: SPECIFIC WRITING MISTAKES

#1 Too Much Embellishment
Too many epithets, participles, and adverbs are one of the most typical mistakes of young writers. I have noticed that many novice writers, especially women, believe the more whimsical they write, the better the text. This is not true. Bulky descriptions spoil the perception of the text. What was the original thought? What the author is speaking about? Such an approach will tire readers out very and very fast.

Do not use allusions and associations that are clear only to you. The reader is not obliged to delve into the recesses of your perception of the world.

#2 Too Much Abstract Concepts
Eternity, infinity, the meaning of life, gods, Nirvana, etc – these philosophical retreats often consists of banal maxims and aphorisms. Some novice authors believe that these phases add some depth, importance, and philosophicity to the narrative.

In fact, pumping the book with arguments about the meaning of life and the essence of being will only show your inexperience and desire to hide the poverty of thought behind the unnecessary mist.

#3 The Substitution of Paragraphs with Personal Emotions and Flow of Consciousness
Inconsistent descriptions do not create a complete picture in the imagination of the reader, which impairs the perception of the text. Leaping from one thought to another, sometimes repeated, with an equally sudden return to the original idea, indicates the inability of the author to keep the narrative line.

#4 Inaccurately Chosen Words or Violation of Lexical Compatibility
It occurs in almost all texts of non-gurus. Sometimes authors use inappropriate words, trying to create a splendid metaphor.

Please choose the words with the closest match to what you want to say. By the way, the classics that had phenomenal skills many times changed words and sentences until they felt they produce more or less consistent chapter.

#5 Illogical Behavior of the Characters
In general, it happens all the time, regardless of the level of the writer. Characters do not behave as they should be in line with their temper, but as the author wants at the moment. Overusing with this trick may ultimately irritate the reader, so he can close the book.


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I hope these tips will help you to avoid the path of graphomania in the favor of becoming one of the most popular writers. Well, the key is that the writing should bring you pleasure and happiness. If you feel happy when writing, why do you need to care about the mistakes and the opinion of others?

Bio:
Lucy Adams is an essay writer from buzzessay.com. She loves blogging, traveling, communicating with new people and gaining new experiences. Lucy is a generalist who’s constantly open to fresh ideas. Feel free to share your list of topics and her choose the one for the research. By the way, blog posts are free.
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New Book! Cover Reveal of Monster Island, A Young Adult Mystery Thriller

10/17/2016

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I have a really exciting announcement for you. Coming November 1st a new Young Adult action adventure mystery thriller will be available on Amazon. This book has to be one of the most exciting I've ever written. It is a page-turner like you wouldn't believe and I am very proud of it. Mark your calendars. Here's the blurb to peak your interest. 

MONSTER ISLAND PART ONE: TAKEN

My name is Lucca DiVitas. I woke up in a burlap sack in a dark shed, and outside someone is screaming.

In my pocket is a note: Pay for your sins.
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Escaping my bonds, I realize I’ve been kidnapped. Tall trees and snow-capped landscapes tell me I’m far from suburbia. And then there’s the ocean crashing angrily against the rocks. I’m on an island with no way of escape.

Rushing toward the screams, I find Kat Voss, a scared teen, who claims she’s running away from a “snake with arms.” I decide she’s in shock until we find cages large enough to fit the world’s most dangerous animals. The cages are open, and they’re empty.

We uncover more mysteries—an observation room with cameras, a bloody operating table, and a fully stocked torture chamber.

Then we realize we aren’t alone.

A voice over the loudspeakers begins directing us, like a guide on the world’s most sadistic tour. The voice tells us to smile for the cameras. Blood is good for business.

If we can’t figure out who is doing this and why, it’ll only be a matter of time before one of us, or ALL of us, ends up dead.

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Monster Island is a Young Adult high-intensity action thriller where the pages turn themselves. Readers who like LOST, Maze Runner, and Miss Peregrine’s Home for Peculiar Children will pick up this story and not be able to put it down.

COMING NOVEMBER 1ST!




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HAPPY BOOK BIRTHDAY to The Heartbeat Thief!

6/22/2016

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HAPPY BOOK BIRTHDAY to The Heartbeat Thief! Let this Victorian dark fantasy surround you in shadows and embrace you in the arms of eternity...
"Krafton not only tells you a story, she makes you experience it with your senses. You can feel the fog moistening your skin as Senza wanders around London. You can smell the city's decay. You can hear the clatter of horses against the cobblestones. And your own heart will anguish along with Senza as she despairs about life--and death--in an era when a woman's beauty guaranteed her a well-matched marriage, even more than her wealth..." --Ronesa Aveela, author of the Mystical Emona series
                           
The Heartbeat Thief by AJ Krafton
The Heartbeat Thief is on special through June 26, 2016...
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Haunted by a crushing fear of death, a young Victorian woman discovers the secret of eternal youth--she must surrender her life to attain it, and steal heartbeats to keep it. In 1860 Surrey, a young woman has only one occupation: to marry. Senza Fyne is beautiful, intelligent, and lacks neither wealth nor connections. Finding a husband shouldn't be difficult, not when she has her entire life before her. But it's not life that preoccupies her thoughts. It's death--and that shadowy spectre haunts her every step. So does Mr. Knell. Heart-thumpingly attractive, obviously eligible--he'd be her perfect match if only he wasn't so macabre. All his talk about death, all that teasing about knowing how to avoid it... When her mother arranges a courtship with another man, Senza is desperate for escape from a dull prescripted destiny. Impulsively, she takes Knell up on his offer. He casts a spell that frees her from the cruelty of time and the threat of death--but at a steep price. In order to maintain eternal youth, she must feed on the heartbeats of others. From the posh London season to the back alleys of Whitechapel, across the Channel, across the Pond, across the seas of Time... How far will Senza Fyne go to avoid Death?
THE HEARTBEAT THIEF
The latest in dark fantasy from Ash Krafton...It's a little bit Jane Austen, a little bit Edgar Allen Poe, and a whole lot of stealing heartbeats in order to stay young and beautiful forever... WHAT READERS ARE SAYING:.
"One of the best stories I've ever read..."
"I highly recommend this novel to readers of all ages."
"A beautifully enchanting story that will steal your heart one beat at a time."
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About the author: Ash Krafton
Ash Krafton writes New Adult speculative fiction under the pen name AJ Krafton. In addition to THE HEARTBEAT THIEF, Ash is also the author of a growing list of poetry, short stories, and urban fantasy novels.
Currently, she’s working on a new series, THE DEMON WHISPERER. First book, CHARM CITY, can be found on Wattpad.com where you can read it free. Find it here: CHARM CITY on Wattpad.com
Find more to love at www.ashkrafton.com
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